宣传稿范文
写作
第一节
你的家乡(Qingshan Village)苹果大丰收，为了在电商平台上吸引外国客人购买，请你用英语为其写一篇宣传稿，内容包括：
1.品质价格；
2.相关服务。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
参考范文：
优秀答卷：
Big and cheap apples! Something that you shouldn’t miss! A perfect opportunity to make a bargain and have a try!
Initially growing in a superb environment without being polluted, the apples are bound to be healthy, which means no poisonous things could be found in them. Their quality is what were awfully confident. Furthermore, on account of the mass production of Qingshan Village, the price of the apples are amazingly low and beyond your imagination. The more you buy, the cheaper they will be. Most importantly,the instant you buy them，they will be delivered to your house. If you have any complaint, it’s with great patience that we’ll solve your problem or give you a full refund!
The apples are greeted with a warm and heated popularity. Just click and buy it, or it will be sold out soon!
考生典型问题：
一、审题不准，搞错文体类型。
写成了书信 ↑
写成了发言稿 ↑
对策：专门进行审题训练，明确应用文各种类型写作特点
二、 该倒装的不倒
改：…not only are our apples juicy, …
改：Not only will we send some photos…
这些同学离高级表达只有一步之遥，还是把倒装句学会吧。
三 、关于“有”的表达，惨不忍睹。
干脆把there are去掉，就不容易错 ↑
改：There will be ↑
上面三位同学，要学好简单句的基本句型↑↑↑
